Most coaches treat Instagram Stories as an afterthought. They post a behind-the-scenes clip, maybe a poll, and move on. Then they wonder why their follower count keeps climbing while their client roster stays flat.
The gap isn't your product, your price, or your niche. It's your stories. Specifically, it's that your stories aren't built to sell.
The three sequences below have been used by coaches across niches — fitness, business, mindset — and each one is engineered to move followers from passive viewers to active buyers. Not by being pushy. By being strategic.
Here's what we're covering:
- Sequence 1: Talking Back — Combat a false belief and convert the doubters
- Sequence 2: Quiz Your Audience — Educate and sell simultaneously
- Sequence 3: Wake Up to This — Drive VSSL views from warm, primed followers
Sequence 1: Talking Back
This is the pattern-interrupt sequence. It works by surfacing a common objection or false belief your ideal client holds — and dismantling it in three slides before pitching your offer.
Here's why it works: when someone sees their own doubt reflected back at them and then immediately sees proof that contradicts it, their guard drops. You're not selling — you're correcting a misconception they already had.
Sequence Structure — 3 Slides
The fake comment trick
Here's something most people don't know: the "comment" on slide one doesn't have to be real. You can manufacture it using a tool like easycomment.ai, which generates a realistic-looking comment screenshot.
The comment should express a specific disbelief about your core result promise. If you help coaches land clients, the comment might say something like "No one is getting 10 new clients in 30 days." If you're a fitness coach, it might be "You can't get visible abs without cutting carbs completely."
The more specific the objection, the better it resonates — because your ideal client has thought the exact same thing.
Copy-Paste Template
"No one is getting [your result] in [timeframe]." Add your photo pointing to it. Caption: "You sure?""These results aren't luck — and they're not working harder than you. I just optimised their [process]. If you want [dream result], reply [KEYWORD]." Set up a ManyChat automation to send them your next step.Pro tip: The objection in the fake comment should feel like something your audience has actively thought — not a strawman. The more it makes them think "wait, that IS what I've been wondering," the harder slide two lands.
Sequence 2: Quiz Your Audience
This is the most underrated sequence of the three — because it sells without feeling like selling.
Here's the mechanic: you run a five-question quiz about your offer. Each question either reveals who you help, what you solve, or what kind of results clients achieve. By question five, your audience has self-educated on your offer, absorbed your social proof, and learned that you have a guarantee — without ever being pitched at directly.
Then you pitch them. And at that point, they're already halfway convinced.
Sequence Structure — 7 Slides
How to structure the five questions
The questions aren't arbitrary. Each one is doing a job:
- Question 1: Who is your offer for? (establishes relevance)
- Question 2: What is the number one problem your offer solves? (surfaces their pain)
- Question 3: How much extra [result] do clients achieve after [timeframe]? (social proof)
- Question 4: What's the average [improvement metric] after [timeframe] inside your program? (more proof)
- Question 5: What is the guarantee inside your offer called? (risk removal)
If you don't track client results yet, swap questions 3–4 for things like: total clients helped, most common win clients report, or a testimonial-based question where the correct answer is a real quote.
Question 5 Template — Guaranteed to Land
"What do we call the guarantee inside [Your Program]?" — even if they get it wrong, they now know you have a guarantee. That alone removes a major buying objection before you ever mention the price.The genius of this sequence is that the educational value is real. Even if someone never buys, they leave your story feed knowing exactly what you do and who you help. That compounds over time. The people who don't buy today remember you when they're ready to buy next month.
Sequence 3: Wake Up to This
This is the highest-converting sequence of the three for driving VSSL (video sales letter) views — which means it's the best sequence for priming a high-ticket sale.
The structure is simple: you flex a personal result, build authority around the method behind it, break down the systems that created it, and then send people to a short video that shows how it all works for them. It's four slides. It runs on curiosity and specificity.
Sequence Structure — 4 Slides
Why this one works so well
By the time someone hits slide four, they've already seen your result, heard your authority framing, and learned the names of the systems you use. They're not clicking the VSSL cold — they're clicking it warm, curious about the specifics.
That curiosity is the conversion driver. People don't opt into a VSSL because they want to be sold to. They opt in because they want to understand the how. Your job in slides one through three is to make them believe there's a specific "how" worth understanding.
Slide 1 Template — The Result Flex
"Every morning I wake up to this." → show your result (payments, followers, client wins, transformation photo). Then: "No [method they assume you use]. Just [your method name]. Here's how →"You don't need to be making $25K/day to use this. The result just needs to be real and aspirational to your specific audience. A fitness coach can show their physique. A business coach can show client check screenshots. A productivity coach can show their calendar or output metrics.
The key is specificity. "I made money" lands flat. "I wake up to 4–6 inbound enquiries every morning from people who watched a 12-minute video" lands differently.
Making all three work: the automation layer
Every sequence ends with a keyword reply CTA. That keyword triggers a ManyChat (or similar) automation that sends your next step — whether that's a VSSL link, a qualifying question, or a booking page.
Without that automation, you're manually DMing every reply. That's not sustainable and it introduces delay that kills conversions. Set it up once and the sequences work while you sleep.
The automation can be as simple as: keyword received → send message with link → ask one qualifying question → route to calendar or sales page based on answer.
The real unlock here isn't the templates — it's posting them. Most coaches read content like this, agree with it, and do nothing. These three sequences take 10–15 minutes to build. The return on that time, based on what coaches have reported, is measurable in thousands of dollars. The only variable is whether you actually ship them.
Summary: your three sequences at a glance
- Talking Back (3 slides): Surface a false belief → prove it wrong with client results → pitch. Best for audience members who are skeptical about your core promise.
- Quiz Your Audience (7 slides): Run a 5-question quiz about your offer → reward engagement → pitch. Best for educating a cold-to-warm audience and building offer awareness.
- Wake Up to This (4 slides): Flex a result → establish authority → reveal your systems → send to VSSL. Best for high-ticket offer warm-up and VSSL opt-ins.
Pick one. Build it today. Post it tomorrow. If it does nothing, come back and tweak the objection or the proof. But if you've done the work to get followers, these sequences give those followers a reason to become clients.
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